Weak adjectives & vague nouns

scared

adjective·40 alternatives·Intensity 25·5 groups
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Visual specifics

by category

10

Replace vague descriptors with concrete visual detail.

pale

adjective·neutral

Her face turned pale as the shadow loomed closer.

A loss of color indicating fear or shock.

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shaking

adjective·neutral

Her hands were shaking, the coffee cup rattling against the saucer.

A tremor reflecting deep fear or anxiety.

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wide-eyed

adjective·neutral

She stared wide-eyed at the figure emerging from the shadows.

Eyes open wide, expressing shock or fear.

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sweating

adjective·neutral

He felt the sweat trickle down his back as the footsteps approached.

Perspiration indicating panic or fear.

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fleeing

adjective·neutral

They were fleeing the scene, hearts pounding with dread.

A swift departure driven by fear.

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trembling

adjective·neutral

Her voice was trembling as she spoke of the nightmare.

A quaking motion reflecting fear or anxiety.

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hiding

adjective·neutral

She was hiding behind the door, her breath shallow.

Seeking refuge due to fear or anxiety.

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screaming

adjective·neutral

The scream echoed through the empty hall, a sound of pure terror.

A loud cry indicating extreme fear or distress.

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panicking

adjective·neutral

He was panicking, thoughts racing as he searched for an escape.

A frantic state reflecting overwhelming fear.

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haunted

adjective·neutral

He felt haunted by memories that lurked in the corners of his mind.

An ongoing fear, as if pursued by ghosts of the past.

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Other-sense specifics

by category

9

Replace visual-default descriptors with sound, smell, temperature, texture.

nervous

adjective·neutral

Her fingers trembled as she faced the crowd, a nervous energy crackling in the air.

A tightness in the chest, a fluttering stomach signaling unease.

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jittery

adjective·casual

The coffee had left him jittery, every creak of the floorboards amplifying his anxiety.

A restless, electric sensation coursing through the body, often accompanied by fidgeting.

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clammy

adjective·neutral

His palms were clammy, betraying the calm facade he struggled to maintain.

Sweaty and cold, skin betraying an inner turmoil or fright.

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heavy

adjective·neutral

The atmosphere felt heavy, as if the very air was laden with fear.

A weight in the chest, a sense of impending doom or anxiety.

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prickling

adjective·neutral

She felt a prickling at the back of her neck, an instinct warning her to flee.

A tingling sensation crawling over the skin, often signaling alarm.

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quaking

adjective·neutral

He stood quaking, each heartbeat echoing louder than the last in his ears.

An involuntary shudder or tremor, revealing deep-seated fear.

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chilled

adjective·neutral

The chilling wind wrapped around her, echoing the fear in her heart.

A sudden drop in warmth, leaving one feeling exposed and vulnerable.

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suffocating

adjective·neutral

The suffocating silence pressed down, amplifying her every worry a thousandfold.

An overwhelming sensation that constricts breathing, often linked to panic.

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faint

adjective·neutral

A faintness washed over her, the world tilting as panic threatened to consume.

A lightheadedness or dizziness, often a signal of overwhelming fear.

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Emotional register

by emotion

8

Descriptors that signal the POV character's emotional response.

uneasy

adjective·neutral

She felt uneasy as shadows danced on the wall, whispering secrets only the dark understood.

A subtle discomfort, hinting at apprehension or doubt.

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apprehensive

adjective·neutral

He stood at the threshold, apprehensive of the storm brewing beyond the door.

A sense of dread about what lies ahead, often accompanied by hesitation.

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frightened

adjective·neutral

Frightened by the sudden crash, she instinctively recoiled, heart racing in her chest.

A sharp jolt of fear, often sudden and overwhelming.

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terrified

adjective·neutral

She was terrified, every sound magnified in the silence of the empty house.

An intense, paralyzing fear that grips the heart and mind.

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alarmed

adjective·neutral

Alarmed by the sirens, she rushed to the window, searching for the source of the chaos.

A sudden awareness of danger, often leading to immediate concern.

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frantic

adjective·neutral

Frantic thoughts raced through her mind as she searched for a way out.

A wild, desperate state of fear, often leading to chaotic action.

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dreadful

adjective·neutral

A dreadful feeling settled in her stomach as the clock struck midnight.

A profound sense of fear or foreboding that weighs heavily on the heart.

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shaken

adjective·neutral

Shaken by the news, he struggled to find his footing in a world turned upside down.

A physical and emotional reaction to fear, often leaving one vulnerable.

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Specific noun instead

by style

10

Often the right fix isn't a better adjective. It's a more specific noun.

dread

adjective·neutral

A sense of dread settled in her stomach as the shadows deepened.

An intense feeling of impending doom or fear.

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alarm

adjective·neutral

The alarm in her voice echoed through the empty halls.

A sudden fear or anxiety, often sparked by an unexpected event.

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panic

adjective·neutral

In a panic, he stumbled over his own feet, searching for a way out.

A sudden overwhelming fear that drives one to act irrationally.

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terror

adjective·neutral

A terror gripped her heart as she faced the unseen threat.

An extreme fear that paralyzes or overwhelms the senses.

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unease

adjective·neutral

An unease settled over the room, thickening the air with tension.

A feeling of discomfort or apprehension about something uncertain.

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fright

adjective·neutral

The fright in her eyes mirrored the chaos surrounding them.

A sudden, intense feeling of fear caused by a shocking event.

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horror

adjective·neutral

Horror washed over him as he beheld the aftermath of the disaster.

An intense feeling of shock or dread, often linked to something grotesque.

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trepidation

adjective·neutral

With trepidation, she approached the door, unsure of what lay beyond.

A feeling of fear or agitation about something that may happen.

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consternation

adjective·neutral

Her consternation was palpable as the news sank in.

Feelings of anxiety or dismay, often at something unexpected.

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apprehension

adjective·neutral

Apprehension clouded her thoughts as she waited for the verdict.

A feeling of anxiety or fear about the future; a sense of foreboding.

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Character-voiced descriptor

by style

3

Adjectives that reflect the POV character's personality or worldview.

jumpy

adjective·casual

Every sound made her jumpy, as if the shadows were alive.

Nervous energy manifesting through sudden movements or reactions.

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horrified

adjective·neutral

She stood horrified, unable to comprehend the scene before her.

A visceral reaction of shock and dread, often leading to paralysis.

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startled

adjective·neutral

She was startled, jumping at the unexpected knock on the door.

A sudden shock or surprise that triggers an instinctive response.

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