totally

The word 'totally' weakens prose by diluting the intensity of the sentiment it tries to convey. It acts as a hedge, suggesting uncertainty about the strength of the emotion expressed. When you say someone is 'totally frustrated,' the word 'totally' undermines the frustration itself. In most cases, removing 'totally' tightens the prose and allows the emotion to resonate more clearly. Before: She was totally convinced of her decision. After: She was convinced of her decision. Before: He was totally unprepared for the test. After: He was unprepared for the test. Before: The movie was totally amazing. After: The movie was amazing. In dialogue, 'totally' can earn its place. Characters often use hyperbole or casual language that reflects their personality or mood. For instance, a teenager exclaiming, 'I’m totally going to ace this!' captures their enthusiasm and confidence because it fits their voice and context. In this scenario, the word adds authenticity rather than clutter. As you review your work, ask yourself: If you delete 'totally' and the sentence still conveys the same message, it was unnecessary clutter.