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The word 'so' weakens prose by introducing vagueness and uncertainty. It can signal to readers that the author is unsure of the strength of the statement. Often, deleting 'so' will tighten the prose without losing any meaning, allowing the sentence to deliver its impact more effectively. Before: She was so tired that she could barely keep her eyes open. After: She was tired enough to barely keep her eyes open. Before: He was so angry that he could hardly speak. After: He was angry enough to hardly speak. Before: It was so cold outside that the breath turned to mist. After: It was cold enough outside for the breath to turn to mist. In dialogue, 'so' can serve a purpose. Characters often use it to express emotions or reactions in a relatable way. For instance, a character might say, 'I was so scared I couldn’t move,' which conveys their heightened emotional state and can deepen characterization. In this context, 'so' adds authenticity to the character's voice and experience. When revising, ask yourself: If you remove 'so' and the sentence still conveys the intended meaning, then it was unnecessary clutter.