probably

The word "probably" weakens prose by introducing uncertainty. When you use it, you signal to the reader that your narrator lacks confidence in what follows. This hesitance can dilute the emotional weight of a moment or character. In most cases, deleting "probably" strengthens your writing, allowing for a more assertive narrative voice. Before: She was probably the best player on the team. After: She was the best player on the team. Before: He probably wouldn’t agree with that decision. After: He wouldn’t agree with that decision. Before: It was probably a mistake to leave early. After: It was a mistake to leave early. In each example, deleting "probably" enhances clarity and impact. The sentences become stronger and more definitive, allowing the reader to engage more fully with the narrative. However, "probably" can earn its place in dialogue. Characters often express uncertainty or indecision, and using "probably" can make their speech feel more authentic. For instance, a character who says, "I probably should have told you sooner" conveys a relatable sense of self-doubt that adds depth to their personality. To self-check, ask yourself: If removing "probably" changes the meaning or intensity of the sentence, consider whether that uncertainty is necessary for your character's voice or the scene's context.