completely

The word 'completely' weakens prose by introducing unnecessary hedging. It suggests uncertainty, as if the writer feels the need to amplify their statement to ensure it is understood. This can dilute the impact of a strong assertion. In most cases, deleting 'completely' results in tighter, more confident writing without losing the intended meaning. Before: She was completely overwhelmed by the news. After: She was overwhelmed by the news. Before: He was completely certain of his decision. After: He was certain of his decision. Before: The task was completely impossible to finish on time. After: The task was impossible to finish on time. In dialogue, 'completely' may find its place, especially when a character expresses emotional intensity. For instance, a character might say, 'I’m completely in love with you,' where the word emphasizes their emotional state. In this context, its use can enhance characterization and convey depth. To self-check, ask yourself: If you remove 'completely' and the sentence retains its meaning, the word was excess.